Hi Djim,
Hope you and your sax friends enjoy this. It sounds fair to me, but I can see a lot of work that could be done. I've used only three basic note velocities: about 90 for melodic emphasis; 75 for the bass; 40 for the baritone sax; and 60 for "accompaniment" notes. But there are so many melodies going here, it's sometimes difficult to decide. I haven't annotated it, I'm afraid, except the "dim." at the end. Somehow the single quarter note seemed too abrupt an ending, especially after the repeated As, so I added a measure. For me, it sounds better at about 92 per quarter note.
Love to hear a tape if you decided you want to play it.
all best,
mgj
PS all the instruments are from Merlin My_Own.
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