Hi Adrian,
Do not kill the messenger. I agree with most of what was said about the sound track of your song on soundonline. The recording is extremely poor. Appreciating music involves listening to sound.
Yet your composition is a very beautiful ballad. It is one of the very best songs I have heard for a long time.
Margaret (my wife) listened to your song and said that she would like to give it a try. If it suits you, send me the .not file of your composition. My address is:
berghofen@ccregion.com.au.
Best wishes,
Herbert