Hi Daniel,

Yes, it certainly does seem radically different from anything you've ever posted, at least in its overall sound. But it is much like your other pieces in its formal soundness. I haven't been able to figure out why you change key signature a couple of times since it doesn't seem to affect the piece, but there is probably a reason that just eludes me. It is an interesting melody. Will it have lyrics, or is it to remain instrumental? Has Ali heard it, and what was her reaction? I don't think I'd revise unless she says "I wish it had more ..." or something.

all best,
mgj