Here's the final version (I hope). Yes, I've decided to finalize it, since if I keep asking people what's wrong with it, I would be revising it forever since you can't please everybody. I edited some, you'll probably notice where. Anyway, I hope to get a chance to show it to Allison some time soon, hopefully today.
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~Daniel